Why so unhelpful?

Just write a sentence to tell me what was wrong. It says you are a native speaker of English, so take the ten seconds.

• The things you added to the definition line should go in a usage note, as they have nothing to do with the meaning of the word.
• Synonyms go before derived terms, per WT:EL.
• The descendants were not formatted with {{l}} or {{desc}}.
• Most of the descendants are not actual descendants, but rather descendants of derived terms.

What about now?

Now it's good, thank you.

Alright, thanks.